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SCENE opens one evening as Rachel, an 18-year-old virgin, sits opposite her step-father at the dining room table. They are eating their meal in relative silence, with only the occasional exchange of pleasantries. Both dad and daughter are dressed modestly and use proper manners while eating. You get the feeling that it is a very conservative household. After he has finished, dad wipes his mouth with his napkin and offers to put the plates away. It's time for Rachel to get ready for bed and he'll be up to tuck her in shortly. She stands obediently, kisses him on the forehead, and leaves the room. CUT to Rachel in her bedroom. Nervously, she removes her clothes and pulls a mirror out from under her pillow. She uses the mirror to check her vagina, spreading her lips to see up inside herself, before hearing her father coming, quickly hiding it and slipping on her nightgown. When her father enters the room, he smiles at his daughter. 'Are you ready for your nightly check?' he asks. She nods and smiles back. As her father pulls back the covers and she lifts her nightgown, the father asks Rachel to reiterate why she thinks it's important that they do this every night, even now that she's 18 and an adult woman. 'Because you are my step-father and it is your responsibility to keep me safe,' she says. The father, spreading her legs open, nods and tells her to continue. 'And ... keeping me safe means that I remain unspoiled.' Looking at her vagina, he asks what he must do to keep her unspoiled. She spreads her lips open and looks back at him. 'You must check my womanhood. That is what mom would want. Please daddy, please check to make sure I'm still a virgin.' The father smiles and sticks his fingers up inside Rachel, wiggling them around while she squirms silently. She looks quite nervous and studies her father's face to gauge his reaction. After a few awkward moments, he pulls his fingers out. He has her turn around, spread her ass cheeks, and show him her anus as well. He inspects it and, smiling in satisfaction, tells her everything looks good and kisses her on the forehead. 'Goodnight my darling,' he whispers and leaves, the camera lingering on her blank face as he turns out the light.
The next day Rachel walks home from school when an older boy named Ethan drives up alongside her and stops his car. The pair have been secretly dating for a few months and today they are supposed to go back to his apartment to hang out. He rolls down his window and asks why she didn't meet him at their usual place? Rachel is very hesitant. She likes Ethan but knows he wants to sleep with her. She's even promised that she wants to do it too. But, now that the day is here, she is panicking. But, not wanting to disappoint her boyfriend, she gets into the car.
CUT to Ethan's apartment. He and Rachel are making out on the couch. After a few minutes of kissing, Ethan goes to remove Rachel's clothes when she asks him to stop. She doesn't think she can do it. Ethan stops respectfully and asks if there is something they should talk about. Rachel begins spewing various excuses about coming from a traditional family, wanting to wait until marriage, and not wanting to catch any diseases. Ethan ensures her that sex is natural, it's normal, and his family goes to church too. It's the 21st century -- attitudes have changed. Besides, he promises to go slow and pull out. Rachel is still unsure ... will she look different after? Will people be able to tell? If you looked at her privates, could you tell something had happened? Her questions tiptoe around her real concerns, without ever actually revealing the truth, and Ethan just writes it off as his girlfriend being naïve. He laughs and tells her that no one will ever be able to tell they had sex. Finally, she agrees, and this descends into the first BG sex sequence, where Ethan takes Rachel's virginity. At first physically uncomfortable with the new sensations, Rachel gradually begins to like it and by the end is begging Ethan not to pull out ... even when he says he's going to cum. He ends up cumming inside of her and the semen dribbles out of her quivering pussy. Ethan holds her and tells her he loves her, while she looks off in the distance very conflicted. It felt so good -- but now she must go home. CUT to Rachel sitting opposite her step-father at the dining room table that evening. They are eating another meal in silence, except this time Rachel looks very anxious. Every time her step-dad asks her something, she clams up and he clearly notices. It is very awkward. Finally, she asks to be excused for bed. He nods, and she stands up, leaving the room quickly without kissing him.
CUT to Rachel curled up under the covers in bed when her step-father enters. He asks her if she is ready to be checked. She doesn't respond. 'Rachel,' he repeats himself. 'I asked you a question. Are you ready to have your nightly check?' Releasing the covers and slowly pulling up her nightgown, she nods. As he spreads her legs open, she nervously asks how it is that he can tell if she is a virgin. Smiling at her innocence, he replies that he is her step-father, the man she grew up with, the man who stood by her side throughout all their family's hardships. Father knows best. She nods in agreement before closing her eyes. 'Are you ready for me to check you now?' he asks. She says yes, spreading her lips. He puts one finger inside of her, then two, then three. There is a long awkward pause, as she anxiously awaits his reaction. Slowly, his expression grows confused then extremely disappointed and angry. 'What have you done?' he begins to yell, as he slides his whole fist inside of her to confirm his findings. 'Rachel, what in god's name have you done?!' He pulls his hand out and stands up in disgust. Rachel scrambles after her step-father, begging him to calm down. He is in a rage, yelling at her for betraying their family and for spoiling herself. He demands to know who has done this; what disgusting man has stolen his daughter's virginity. In desperation, she turns herself around and shows him her asshole. 'But ... I'm still pure here! I'm still technically a virgin, daddy. He didn't get my special hole! I wouldn't give that away!' The father looks away in disgust, telling her he can't even bear to look at her anymore. She continues to plead with him, asking for forgiveness. 'I'm still just like your real daughter! Please, just look at me. I wouldn't give it all away, I promise. I .... was .... saving it for you!!' This makes the step-father stop. He slowly turns around and looks at her, seething. 'What did you say?' She swallows and repeats herself: 'I said, I'm saving my anal virginity for you! I've always wanted you to have that.' He stares at her for a long time before starting to unbuckle his pants. 'That's right, you have, haven't you?! And tonight, I'm going to take it. Now that you're spoiled, there's no point in waiting anymore, is there? I might as well get what's rightfully mine before someone else does.' She smiles anxiously and thanks him, trying everything she can just to make him love her again ... begging him to take what belongs to him and to forgive her for her indiscretions. This descends into the second BG sex scene, where Rachel gives her step-father her anal virginity. She tries to be the best obedient step-daughter during the entire affair. After he has finished, dad staggers off of her and starts putting his clothes back on. Rachel lies very still, trying to gauge his reaction now. He looks down on her, breathing hard, before wiping his brow and leaning in to kiss her forehead. 'Goodnight,' he whispers and leaves, the light turning off.
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